It's the Pie Knight. He's a plucky guy who does his best to defend his kingdom. A kingdom that chose a pie as its national symbol.
And this is the Black Knight, named for his dark armor. He hails from the kingdom of the grumpy face. He's only slightly more competent than the Pie Knight when it comes to defending his homeland, but he's much, much more violent.
5 comments:
Victory pie needed. Multitude of possible endings, still needs to end with a victory pie.
You weirdo! What a reTARDED story! I LOVE IT! I can't wait to see what you do with it. I think the ending you had was pretty sweet. But any of the endings suggested are pretty awesome as well.
Okay, so here it is, the best of both worlds. When the pie-knight and the black knight have both been stabbed, one of them reaches for the pie and realizes they are both on a hill. There is a moment of suspense, like "omg, is he gonna do it, for surely it will result in peril" but he does, and as he gets the pie, he starts rolling down the hill. as they are rolling down, impaled, they both fight for the pie. Because its delicious, that's why.
Wonderfully gory silly story, Keep it up.Hey maybe the horses can walk back to the top of the hill and watch the knights tumble town.
I think the story is good for an animation short. I think you could push the pie-imagery even further though in the pie knights design or his castle design. Maybe give both the knights some asymmetrical touches so they are more interesting
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